crit 4 / over the week

Yesterday I had my crit which is others say what is working or not and well it wasn't so bad but the essay is at the moment the hardest for my class of seven.  We will get it and even the internship as I realize we need more hours so got to see what I'm to do tomorrow.

But this is my work but then my classmate while critting took the four A4 off so its ok and the group are waiting for my end project which I'll be got to do (comic book in form)

So many things to do Blog, Journal, Essay, internship and making I'll can do this.

Crit my mate work too so it was well a bit hard to say as it was just being a teacher.

Got a reply from Tautai about their exhibition but no luck its okay there's always another somewhere.

Working on Essay (my essay is based from manga and Tongan folktales together but my own style,

crits other mates who are like my little sister's and internship.